Chapter 13.1

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5 thoughts on “Chapter 13.1

  1. Pingback: Chapter 13.1 | Trusting Desire

  2. Oh no! Of course you didn’t feel a sense of relief, Ellie–that kiss meant so much more than nothing!!

    Good to see Ellie opening up a bit more and smiling of course, but still those two seem worlds apart. Gah! I haven’t lost hope yet though, hehe.

    Another great installment πŸ™‚ Especially loved the black-out effect there when Ellie fainted. Very creative!

    • Oh, yes. That kiss meant SO much more to both of them, but it’s so much easier and safe to call it a mistake in hopes that things can return to normal (whatever normal there was between them anyway.) Litle do they know that you can only deny your feelings for so long… heehee. So don’t ever loose hope! πŸ˜‰

      Thank you so much for the black-out observation! I am so glad it worked. I wondered if I should have made that sequence a little longer, but when someone faints everything goes by so quickly.

  3. Oh boy these two. Stop lying by saying the kiss meant nothing when you know it meant a whole lot! At least Ellie made some progress in opening up to him. It’s a step in the right direction.

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